Friday, October 8, 2010
Wednesday, October 6, 2010
Tuesday, October 5, 2010
Monday, October 4, 2010
Autobiographical Narrative Topic Selection
What happened? List actions in chronological order.
1.Sitting in the living room
2.Mom break the windows
3. Everyone rush outside
4. The police comes and take her away
Where did it happen? Describe the setting.
● city and state: San Diego
● building: Apartment 8 3775 south 49th st
● room:living room
● furniture:windows
Who was involved? List and describe the characters present.
Tierra
● appearance: Pajamas
● actions: running, scared, crying
● speech: no speech just thoughts, and screaming
character A : Mom
● appearance: Drugged up
● actions:Breaking windows
● speech: Speechless, but you can see the pain in her eyes.
character B: Dad / Step Mom (Yvette)
● appearance: Pajamas, Pajamas
● actions: Anger ,Regret, running after my mom, running and Anger
● speech:Yelling Screaming, Anger.
When did it happen? Explain how long ago it took place.
● year: 2003
● month and/or season: September
● time of day: 8 pm
● your age:8 years old
Why did you select this event?
● I selected this, because it is the most imaginary thing that I can remember and it explain one of the reason I don’t like my step mom, till this day.
How did it change you?
● At first I didn’t think that anyone can be so angry and I didn't know the affect of drugs. but afterward I understand how you can love someone to the point were your heart can take over and you can do the most strangest things that you don't think that you would do. I realize that all throughout out life people will do things that they soon or later will regret.
What happened? List actions in chronological order.
1.Sitting in the living room
2.Mom break the windows
3. Everyone rush outside
4. The police comes and take her away
Where did it happen? Describe the setting.
● city and state: San Diego
● building: Apartment 8 3775 south 49th st
● room:living room
● furniture:windows
Who was involved? List and describe the characters present.
Tierra
● appearance: Pajamas
● actions: running, scared, crying
● speech: no speech just thoughts, and screaming
character A : Mom
● appearance: Drugged up
● actions:Breaking windows
● speech: Speechless, but you can see the pain in her eyes.
character B: Dad / Step Mom (Yvette)
● appearance: Pajamas, Pajamas
● actions: Anger ,Regret, running after my mom, running and Anger
● speech:Yelling Screaming, Anger.
When did it happen? Explain how long ago it took place.
● year: 2003
● month and/or season: September
● time of day: 8 pm
● your age:8 years old
Why did you select this event?
● I selected this, because it is the most imaginary thing that I can remember and it explain one of the reason I don’t like my step mom, till this day.
How did it change you?
● At first I didn’t think that anyone can be so angry and I didn't know the affect of drugs. but afterward I understand how you can love someone to the point were your heart can take over and you can do the most strangest things that you don't think that you would do. I realize that all throughout out life people will do things that they soon or later will regret.
Sunday, October 3, 2010
“My Memorable Days.”
1. 14th birthday it was the best birthday ever.
2. My first foster home, I really didn’t like my foster mom.
3. My life with my cousin La’Toya in the 6th grade
4. The 8th grade D.C trip because it is something I would love to do over again if I could with the same people.
5. The time my mom broke the windows because I felt like everything in my body stopped.
6. The time I almost got raped because till this day I will never forget.
7. My first tracks meet because it was the first time I realized I could run fast.
8. My 8th grade Knotts Berry Farm trip because it was really fun.
9. My 5th grade boardwalk trip because I was with all my old friends.
10. Count down of the two worst years of my life when my dad got married and I ended up in the foster system.
2. My first foster home, I really didn’t like my foster mom.
3. My life with my cousin La’Toya in the 6th grade
4. The 8th grade D.C trip because it is something I would love to do over again if I could with the same people.
5. The time my mom broke the windows because I felt like everything in my body stopped.
6. The time I almost got raped because till this day I will never forget.
7. My first tracks meet because it was the first time I realized I could run fast.
8. My 8th grade Knotts Berry Farm trip because it was really fun.
9. My 5th grade boardwalk trip because I was with all my old friends.
10. Count down of the two worst years of my life when my dad got married and I ended up in the foster system.
My Memorable Days
The most memorable day was February 8, 2005. I remember it because the day before my step mom and dad got into a fight and CPS came and took my step away. This particular day I had a funny feeling about go to school. I begged my dad not to take me to school, he told me that everything will be fine and that I didn’t have to worry. It was around lunch time and I got called to the office I still remember thinking that it was my dad. When I walked into the office some lady was standing there with my Principle and she told me that she was taking me away. I didn’t know any better so I went with her. Not knowing I would never see my dad again. She took me to my very first foster home. When I got there I was really scared and I meet my foster mom and the two kids she already had Brook but we called her DJ, and Chelsea. Chelsea was the oldest and she kind of scared me. The first night I was there and she took the house out to dinner I liked her at first. I started attending school Audubon Elementary. I was in the fifth grade. It was pretty cool I made friends right off the back Kavricia and Sherry. We did everything together, we were like sisters. I remember the very first day I started to hate my foster mom. It was the first day I was supposed to go see my dad. I was at school and this boy was dancing behind me in the lunch line. It really made me mad for some reason and I decided to do a high kick and I told him to run. So I purposely kick him in his private. When I got home my foster mom told me as a punishment I wasn’t aloud to see my dad. I remember being so angry and sad all in one. So from that day on I never liked her, and everyday I lived in that house was my worst days except the time I spent with Chelsea. The day I moved with my cousin La’ Toya, was the happiest day of my life at that point in time. (Words 382)
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