Last 9th Grade check In letter

May 31, 2010

Dear Ms. Priester,
There is so much to talk about but I can’t find the words to say it. So I am going to talk about Graduation. I can’t wait for it to come I promised myself not to cry but everyday I think about Chelsea and Calvin saying goodbye. I have known Chelsea since the fifth grade. My very first foster home I went to she was there and we became like sisters. Then I moved away to live with my cousin and haven’t seen her since then I moved here and we were reconnected she is like my big sister I never had but always wanted. Then there is Calvin at first I never liked him but then I warmed up to him, and he has always been there for me when I needed someone to talk to, but now they are leaving and I will be alone, I hoped and wished that this day would never come. I feel that my sophomore year will be the hardest. I feel I might fall back because right now they are the only reason I keep on trying. I feel like I have lost so much to keep losing more. I knew the day would come that they would walk out the door. I would tell them to don’t look back and to keep moving forward. I would tell them to do it for me if not anything else because even thought they are both leaving they are all I have left. (Words 249)

But on to a different topic I am really excited about my sophomore year. I feel I am no longer at the bottom of the food chain but I am just one above it. I feel I am closer to my senior year closer to moving forward. Soon I will be graduating myself. It makes me happy to think about when that time will come, because I will be one of the few of my family to go to college. It makes me happy to think about the day when I will walk across the stage, of even give a speech to the people who have helped me on my journey I am just begging to take. My favorite thing to think about is San Diego State. My colleges switched so many times but I think that I have finally made up my mind. I want to make something of myself. I don’t want to struggle like my mom and dad did. I want my parents to be proud of their last kid, to help them when they need it because without them I wouldn’t be here. I didn’t want for this to happen bit its all part of the plan to become more than I am.(Words 207)

The thing that hurts the most as I look around I see all these kids who have potential, but they throw it away on smoking, I don’t know why people smoke, for pain, heart ach, stress, and struggle, everyone goes through pain but not everyone goes to smoking. People look at me, and they see my mask I feel no one really sees me, they see what I put on they see my play. Once they do see the heart ach and pain they walk away as if they don’t care. I feel alone most of the time. My real family live so far away I barely get to see them. I have a few people on campus that I call family like Chelsea, Calvin, Jabreil, Kristiana, and m other half Shaurice. Shaurice is like my little sister I don’t know what I would do if anything ever happened to her, people look at us and see that we were meant to be. The only girl that knows almost everything about be. There is only one person on this whole campus who knows everything about me and that Broderick. He is the only guy that knows why I am here, my past, everything. Shaurice and Broderick together know everything about me they know my whole life story. It hurts me when I see them hurt I feel there pain. When the cry I feel like dieing inside. They mean that much to me that if anything happened to them I would go crazy. (Words 253)
Total words: 709

Sincerely,
Tierra Andrews

Using APA Format

When writing a research paper and using sources in an APA format. When you put a source in your paper you normally put the source after a quote and in parentheses, and the period goes after the parentheses. In the parentheses may also have the author and page number if it came from a book. Many times it is necessary to cite your work when you summarize ideas from more than one source. Then there is the Reference page, the research page is a full list of sources that was used in the paper. Most of the time people put there sources alphabetically. When you write a reference page you write the authors last name followed by his/her first initial. If you choose to have a URL you must use the full URL no matter how long it is.

Free Blog Post

This weekend will be full of decision. In life people have to make decisions, decisions about family, work, and life in general. As we all grow up the decisions we have to make become harder. Some people run from their problems I do that sometimes depending on the problem. I sometimes have a problem with not talking to people it’s hard to expressing my feeling. So I write and today I really don’t have nothing to write about I feel like people should have a choice to write or not like I write when I want to when I have something on my mind or if I feel a certain way then I real write about it but it takes me awhile to find the words.

Prom/ BBQ blog post

My experience at prom was very exciting. It was my first which made it better. I took a lot of pictures. The food was delicious I really enjoyed it. Then I liked the fact that we didn’t have to go to school till 9 o’clock the whole day was fun. I was doing the sack race and during it my pants started falling down I was so happy that the bag was big enough because it would have been very embarrassing. Then I participated in the watermelon eating contest it was fun I had a really big watermelon juice smile on my face. It was so much fun. I can’t wait till next year.

Blog Value

Using bogs at school is a great experience for a student. I myself have a blog and I enjoy mine I started to use my blog not only for school but also for other things like in my free time I like to write poems and I will sometimes post them on my blog. I feel like it’s a good thing because it looks really good when you apply for a college and they look at your blog they can see your creative side and they can see how good you are with technology. A blog to me is also a good way to communicate with your teachers. Blogs are also good because it’s a way people communicate with each other a way to express who you really are.

Business Letter

17701 San Pasqual Valley Road
Escondido, Ca, 92025
April, 22, 2010

Mr. Ron Major
Principle
San Pasqual Academy
17701 San Pasqual Valley Road
Escondido, Ca, 92025

Dear Mr. Ron Major:

I am writing to ask you about adding more extra curricular actives to our school. Since you are the principle you have the authority to make an impact on the campus. If we added more things like a track team more people will become more active.

I would like to see this change occur because I worked hard in basketball season, but once that season was over there was really nothing left for me to do. After that I became very indolent. If we add a track team, most kids would become more physically active. Most of the sports are seasonal, so they only play one or two sports. Students join seasonal sports, but discontinue physical activities once that season ends. Track, however, will help benefit other sport. If we increase physical activity that well help decrease the chances of most of kids becoming over weight. The administration and the students need to get the school together and discuss what sports the students like and will all participate in.

Thank you in advance for taking the time to read this. I gladly appreciate it. I look forward to hopefully meeting with you to discuss on a deeper level.


Sincerely,


Tierra

Dear Daughter (Renesmee Nicloe)

April 20, 2010

Dear Renesmee Nicole,
This is mommy I am writing you to talk to you about Cyber-Predators. Cyber Predators are grown people like mommy who like to talk to little kids, more teenagers. They like to talk to them and make them feel comfortable to the point were you trust them, then one day they might just come take you and you will probably never see mommy again. But there are some things that you can do to protect your self from that.
First when you get to that teenage state and you want to go on things like my space and face book, (don’t laugh those were popular sites when I was 14) but to get back to what I was saying when you go one those web sites never give your full name or post your full name because someone might try and look you up and then you might never see mommy again. Also if you do go on these websites you really don’t want to post inappropriate pictures of your self because that is what will drag the predators also know as pedophiles to you and you information. Remember to always use your real age don’t lie just to be cool and get on sites you not supposed to be on. Some people go on these sites because they feel like they have no one they can talk to so they look for comfort in other people.
Renesmee I want you to know that you can always talk to me about anything. If you ever get your self caught in this situation, I might get mad but I will help you get out of it because it really is not safe, yeah at fist the predator say that they care and that they will protect but to be honest all that they are really looking for is a young naïve child that they can take advantage of and I will try everything in my power so that that doesn’t happen also that. Some of the things I will do is block some of these sites, I will talk to you, and make time for you so that you know that you can always come to me. Also make sure that you are always busy so that you will have no free time to do things like that. Not really but I will put you in sports to lesson your free time.



Sincerely, with all my love
Mommy (Tierra)