Tuesday, September 28, 2010

"Two Kinds: Mother & Daughter Conflict Paragraph

In the conflict to were Jing-Mei’s mom wants her to be a child prodigy and Jing-Mei doesn’t want to be, I agree with Jing-Mei because, I feel that when people try and push someone to do something it puts a lot of pressure on someone. I know what it feels like when someone wants you to be something your not. For an example when Jing-Mei mom tried to get her to do acting she started to refuse. Jing-Mei wanted to be her own person, not who her mom wanted her to be. I feel that the reasons for Jing-Mei’s action were perfectly understandable, I like to imagine when I was in her shoes and how I felt. (Words 117)

Sunday, September 26, 2010

“Favorite Character Interview.”

Q: What is your name?
A: My name is Debbie.
Q: What is your favorite character in a movie or book?
A: My favorite character is in a book, his name is Edward Sawtelle.
Q: Describe your character in one word.
A: I would describe Edward as scared.
Q: What is the character’s motivation?
A: Edward’s motives were protection of his family.
Q: Describe the character’s appearance.
A: I saw Edward as an All American, Young about age 11, fare skin, freckles.
Q: Name a few actions the character performs.
A: A couple of thing Edward did was he ran away on foot with is dog by his side. He also tries to save is family from his murderous Uncle, but it ends up getting him killed.
Q: What does the character think about?
A: Edward only thought about watching and protecting his family.
Q: What does the character say?
A: Edward never spoke, he couldn’t
Q: Why do you like this character?
A: Edward was fascinating, because of the way the book was written, you walked in his shoes. You saw things from his eyes, you cloud feel his pain.

Thursday, September 23, 2010

"Two Kinds" In the Shoes of a Prodigy

If I was pushed to be a Child Prodigy I would feel trapped because, I would feel that I can’t make me own decisions. The funny thing is my Auntie Patricia tried to make me a child actress, just like in the story. When she was pushing me I was younger than her and I just went along with it, but now if she tried I would dyne. I feel that when you are younger school isn’t as bad but now I wouldn’t have time and I think that I would hate my life. I would hate my life because I would feel like it wasn’t mine; I would feel like it was hers. So I understand what she is going through and wanting to be her own person.(words 129)

Wednesday, September 22, 2010

“My Input for Staff-Teacher Conferences”

I have a B- because I work hard and I try my best, I am working for an A. I feel happy about my grade in my English class because it shows that I can get above grade level in the hardest class. I feel proud about my grade because not a lot of people can get a B-. Some of the thing that I struggle with in this class is that, everything is online and I don’t always have access to the page because of the Flash Drive. I need to work harder and try everything possible to keep up my grade. I feel that the Adults on campus really don’t need to change anything, but I feel that they should be more supportive. I feel that Ms. Priester is an excellent teacher and she doesn’t need to change anything.

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

"Two Kinds"


It was a Sunday morning, and I really didn’t want to do anything that day but stay in my room and watch movies. But I couldn’t as soon as 11:00 it my day flipped. My houseparent came to work. As soon as she go on all of the girls were in the living room and she asked them to go to the movies. This made me really upset because it was either go to the movies or go to a different house. Either way it wasn’t what I wanted to do. One full day of nothing, but movies in my house in my pajamas but no it won’t happen. I ending up going to the movies but that don’t change the fact that it was not what I wanted. Afterwards I was still pretty upset but then I decided to get over it. I figured that would be easier than having a bad mood fir the whole day. (158 words)

Monday, September 20, 2010

“Character Acrostic Poem for Tierra”

T: Trustworthy
(Ex. When ever someone tells me something in confidence I don’t go back and tell someone else.)
I: Independent
(Ex. I make my own decisions and I can work for the things I want I don’t need people to survive i can do it on my own.)
E: Easy Going
(Ex. I like to be in my house, I really don’t like to to be bothered with people on weekends, only sometimes.)
R:Reliable
(Ex. People can count on me, when I say I am going to something I will try my hardest to get it done.)
R:Responsible
(Ex. I take care of my business, before I decided to do something. I do my own thing and I can take care of my self.)
A:Active
(Ex. I hate being inside the house doing nothing during the week, I feel very lazy, so I have to be up moving around doing something.)

“Character Acrostic Poem for Maggie”

M: Meticulous
(example: Maggie is strict on how she looks, she is insecure.)
A: Affected
(example: Maggie was severely affected by the fire.)
G:Gentle
(example: Maggie was willing to give up the quilt to make her sister happy.)
G:Giving
(example: she will do anything to make her sister happy, raising money to put her sister to college.)
I: Insecure
(example: every since she got burned she is not comfortable in her own skin.)
E: Embarrassed
(example: She feels like her sister looks, better than she does and she doesn’t like showing off her body because if her burns.)

Sunday, September 19, 2010

"Character Analysis of Shaurice"


The person I chose to analyze is Shaurice. I chose to analyze her because, I think that she is very outgoing, and she is also very out spoken. I say that she is out going because she always has a smile on her face, unless she is upset. She is very out spoken because, she says what is on her mind and she is not afraid to tell someone how she feels about them. When people look at her they think that she is a girl who is not afraid to say how she feels and they are right. Also when they see her play sports they can tell she is a girl with confidence and it shows in every sport she plays. She tries her hardest in every sport and that to me is where she is the most strongest.

Thursday, September 16, 2010

Everyday Use


In the story “Everyday Use”, the character I can compare the most to is Dee. I compare myself to Dee because just like her I have moved away from home. I want better for myself to and sometime I don’t want to bring family over because I am a little embarrassed of the way that my family lives. I love the way that they act but I just hate their living environment. I won’t go extreme like she did and change my name, because I like my past and I know where I come from, which is why I want to change it. I compare myself to her because we have a lot in common we both come from places where we want to live from. But unlike her I wouldn’t change the way I am.(words 136)

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Maggie Point of View

Maggie Point of View: Growing up I feel that Dee was always the pretty one. When I got burned it was the worst thing that has happened to me I feel like no one wants to look at me and that people see me as a monster. That is why it is hard for me to show my body I feel that people will look at me and be discussed. When Dee went off to college I was happy but at the same time upset because that could have been me if it wasn’t for mother and I then she would have never been going to college. So when she came back here with her new husband all I could think was. Why does this girl think that she is better than I am, why does she act the way she does. I feel like she is ashamed of momma and I because we don’t live like she does, and because we don’t like to change were we come from like the way she does. We are proud of were we come from and they way we are and I would change it for the world.(words 196)

Family Traditions

The family Traditions I would start would be. Every Christmas, my kids and I will bake cookies and set them out for Santa. Also on Christmas Eve I would let my kid’s open up two presents one that they will pick out and another that I will choose. Before Christmas in like the begging of December, I will sit with my kids and make a Christmas list. A tradition I would start is every year I will measure my children growth, so that they can go back and look back to the age of five and see how tall they were. I will also have a tradition that we have thanksgiving at my house every year to were all the families come over to my house and then for Christmas my family and I will visit another family member.    (139 words)

Monday, September 13, 2010

"Character Prior Knowedge Pragaraph about Tom Benecke"

In the “Contents of a Dead man Pocket” Tom Benecke was the main character. Tom was the type of person who had a lot of conflicts going through his mind. The main character which Tom was is the person who the character is reading through he/she is the one going trough the conflict. In a different situation there would be a minor character a person who really doesn’t matter someone who ishttp://www.delicious.com/ttandrews369 in the background, a sidekick. In this story there wasn’t one. Tom showed many different character traits, he was working on the decisions he w=had to make which was an internal conflict. An Internal conflict is when someone is going though something with in them selves.

"Plant X" Plot Assessment

http://storybird.com/books/planet-x/ ( underconstruction will be posted shortly)

Sunday, September 12, 2010

9/11 blogpost

Around this time nine years ago I was it was a Tuesday and I was at school. I remember it becasue at like 10 I think it was my teachers stopped everything and my principle went on the intercom, and he told all of the kids to go to the auditorim. I remember sitting there trying to figure out what happened and when i walked into the auditorim my teachers said that somerthing bad had happened and that we were all going home elarly, and that they had already called all of our parents to come get them. i wen home and watched the news with my mom and dad, that is all the happened my first september 11, 01.

Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Mouse in the Cafe

It all started on a Friday night, it was a cold night and Melissa the mouse was staring at this hole that entered the café. She stared at it debating whether or not to go in. As she was thinking all of these things came to mind, what if she was to go in there and there was a cat, or what is she went and there was a dog what would she do. So after awhile she looked at the hole again and she took a deep breath and she took a small step and she went forward. She continued walking forward and as she did she also continued thinking. Soon she came to a stop and she looked in, to her surprise there was nothing to worry about. She walked into the hole and she found warmth. She was so delighted that she went into the hole she wanted to jump for joy. As she started walking she was also looking for a nice place to sleep. She found a small couch and she rolled up in to a little ball. She went to sleep and she realized she was safe n her new home ( Words :199)

Tuesday, September 7, 2010

Prompt B

Prompt B: write a narrative paragraph from the point of view of Leonard Mead as he enters the facility.

As I walked though the door into the building I was thinking to myself, “out of all the people who let this take over their mind and I am the one who is sent her.” I began to look around and as I looked around I saw people who looked like the life as been sucked out of them. I did not to turn into one of those people. The first night there I was looked into a room with nothing but a T.V and a bed. I tried my best not to look at the T.V. for the first five days or so I looked at the wall after the sixth day I cracked. There was nothing to do so I finally watched T.V. at first it wasn’t all that bad but then I noticed that nothing else was going to change and I was turning into the people I didn’t want to be. Everything I did was in front of the T.V. the only place I moved to was the bathroom to use. Other than that I stayed in front of the T.V.

Thursday, September 2, 2010

The Pedestrian

The reason Ray Bradbury wrote “ The Pedestrian” is because he wanted to explain what he thinks life would have been like in the future. Because computer were not invented well internet he figured that everyone would live at home watching T.V, and that life will be a very sad place. The purpose of him writing this story is to show people what he thinks will happen in the future. It is easy to tell because when he was walking he didn’t talk to anyone because everyone was in the house and everything seemed black and boring. Which made me think what will the future really will be like will things change to were people all stay in there home. Will the government give up on certain people, doesn’t it make people want to wonder.

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Homework Promt B

I expect that in 2053 there will be flying cars, no I was just kidding I except that in 2053 there will be better schools because with all of the high tech thing that we have going on that by that time it will get better. I expect that by that time all of the budget cuts will be gone and that we will have more people working. I except for the amount in the foster system to decrease by half because hopefully, by that time people will do the right thing and treat there kids better. Also I except that people will be more of leader than followers and that every kid will grow up at the time they need to that because of family they wont have to grow up faster than there time.

Homework

I think that the theme is to spend more time with your friends. But not there is a time for everything and that in life there will be a time to party and have friends and to love, but there is also a time to work. in the contents of a dead man pocket it also talked about how there is a time for work and friends.