Prompt B: write a narrative paragraph from the point of view of Leonard Mead as he enters the facility.
As I walked though the door into the building I was thinking to myself, “out of all the people who let this take over their mind and I am the one who is sent her.” I began to look around and as I looked around I saw people who looked like the life as been sucked out of them. I did not to turn into one of those people. The first night there I was looked into a room with nothing but a T.V and a bed. I tried my best not to look at the T.V. for the first five days or so I looked at the wall after the sixth day I cracked. There was nothing to do so I finally watched T.V. at first it wasn’t all that bad but then I noticed that nothing else was going to change and I was turning into the people I didn’t want to be. Everything I did was in front of the T.V. the only place I moved to was the bathroom to use. Other than that I stayed in front of the T.V.
Tierra, what are you supposed to do when you use dialogue in your work? Capitalize the first letter in that sentence. Remember to use periods to indicate the beginning of a new sentence, too!
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